• It is often said that an essay requires an interesting aspect.

  • In 3, I realized that writing a poetic and emotional essay is not the only way.

    • However, I haven’t fully grasped what I should do instead.
  • Maybe it’s about the development of the story (introduction, development, twist, conclusion).

  • When we talk about “interesting” here, it’s more about “unexpectedness” and “surprise” than just sustaining interest.

    • It’s not just about having individual interesting points, but it’s important to sustain the reader’s interest in the essay.
      • I used to think that “interesting” meant coming up with flashy techniques, but it’s not like that (blu3mo).
    • Of course, individual interesting points can also be used to sustain interest.
  • For example, when I wrote the Discussion on Immersive Virtual Spacetime Axis, I didn’t think about the development of the story.

    • Making the writing “interesting” means not only making it easy for the reader to understand, but also being mindful of their emotions.