Haiku

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  • Lately, I’ve been getting more interested in trying my hand at haiku, as I’ve been exposed to it in multiple ways simultaneously.
    • I find it intriguing to design an experience that arises when reading 17 syllables.
    • Also, it’s nice that you can do it without any tools.
      • Since it’s only 17 syllables, it doesn’t require much brain memory.
      • Therefore, you can come up with haiku even without paper and pen.
    • It seems like a good way to compactly record emotions.
      • It’s difficult to record emotions with just logical sentences, so it seems useful.
      • It satisfies the Record Addiction (?)
  • Since there’s a “Riku” (a haiku gathering) event, I feel like throwing myself into it and giving it a try.
    • Let’s Create Haiku Seminar #01 [Basics and Misunderstandings of Haiku] | Kobaluto | note
      • I’ll give it a read.
      • I just need to figure out what to write about.
      • Let’s Create Haiku Seminar #03 [How to Create the First Line] | Kobaluto | note
        • Oh!
      • Random ideas for topics I want to write about:
        • Experiencing the mist of the world
          • It seems interesting to approach it in a way that is different from explaining its fascination logically.
          • The experience I want to capture
            • I missed my train, but it cleared up, so it’s fine.

              • Mist seen in the train next to me

                • Hmm, I’m not quite satisfied with it.
                • It turned out to be “rin-ken” instead of “tonari-ken” even though I intended it to be “tonari-ken.”
                  • But “tonari-machi” is different from “go-moji,” so I feel that way.
                    • I want to express that I’m in a place like “Doko ya nen kore” (blu3mo).
                • The interpretation of “train” in the haiku can be ambiguous between a train and a car.
                  • I want to make it clear that it’s a train.
                  • Maybe I should have used a word that looks like a station name, like in 625976ad79e1130000b02291, I see.
                • Words like “miru” (to see) and “okita” (to wake up) are boring.
                • There’s no emotion.
                  • I don’t necessarily need to directly express the emotion, but I guess I can express it through careful word choice.
              • (rickshinmi)

                • As I pass through Kojimachi, the mist clears

                  • I see~ (blu3mo)

                  • As I pass the disembarking station, the mist clears

                    • Would something like that be easier to understand? (blu3mo)
                    • “Sugite mo” (even if I pass) seems more appropriate than “sugiru to” (when I pass).
                    • It feels like it’s just an explanation.
                      • I chose Kojimachi just because my school is located there, but I think it’s interesting to enjoy the range of interpretations that vary depending on the reader’s perspective on Kojimachi (rickshinmi).
                        • I see (blu3mo)
                          • For example,

                            • As I pass through Kabukicho, the mist clears

                            • It expands the association, like saying that the mist is the smell of tobacco in Kabukicho (which is the smell of tobacco for me).
            • The feeling of “Oh~” when you realize there are unfamiliar views near your home that you thought you knew (blu3mo)(blu3mo)(blu3mo)
              • This is a tough one~ (blu3mo)

              • The profile I see

        • Difficult
          • It reminds me of when I first started writing essays.
          • But I thought it would be satisfying if I could express it as intended.
    • Shikabane-Ku
    • Far away
      • It reminds me of SCP-1281.
      • The interesting aspect of there being a universe on the extension of the sky.
      • Temporal distance and spatial distance.
    • Time over, didn’t make it.

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• I like this.

• Conversely (?), I’m getting interested in haiku, lol.- Haiku Making Seminar #01 [“Basics of Haiku and Misconceptions”] | Kobaluto | note

• Kobalun @ Higashi Kobaluto (@428sk1_guardian)

• In particular, by reading a lot of expressions written by various people, you can actively articulate which ones stand out as poetic expressions and conversely, which ones look like “adolescent poems”. By doing so, it becomes easier to objectively evaluate the poetic effect of your own expressions.

• https://twitter.com/428sk1_guardian/status/1475750980616863746

Recommended (axokxi)

• https://youtu.be/6wwjr_Ui2yE